Neptune Calling
Ever seductive
Ever powerful
Your call is constant
I stand at your feet
A slave.
Listening to your whispering surf
White foam gurgling at my feet
I want to heed your call
I want to fall at your feet
I want to walk into your depths
I want to keep walking
In to your welcoming barnacles.
I can feel your waters engulf me
And your tentacles embrace me
As I am pulled down into your liar
In your throne, at the depths of the ocean
An eternal sleep at your feet.
Though your seduction is complete
I will not heed
I will not take that first step
If I do it will be the last
If I do I will walk until I am yours.
Oh mighty Neptune
Why do you call?
It is not my time yet
I cannot fall, even though I want to
I cannot be one with you yet.
Though you call oh mighty Neptune
I am still in the land of the living
I walk amongst them
Your lure is not for me
not tonight at least.
Great stuff. Didn’t lknow that you are a poet until now. Well done. Great work.
Take care
Ghassan
Comment by Ghassan — March 31, 2008 @ 7:10 am
This poem is powerful.
I am also a poet and I have been writing poetry for about 29 years.
I’m looking for people who might be interested in contributing their poetry two one or both of my blogs. (You can include a link to your own blog as well).
Please let me know if you are interested. There are the blogs:
Free Love Poems
Your Poems. Your Stories.
Comment by Anna — May 4, 2008 @ 10:10 am